20171216雅思考试写作真题范例丨海归湾雅思真题
With the proliferation of the internet, social networking sites are playing a dominate role in modern people’s life. Some contend that they mainly impose detrimental impact on people and community. Believing the negative effect truly exists, I still see the benefits brought by them.
Personal information is getting more readily available due to the requirement involved in the registration process for social networking sites. Some private data, such as one’s home address, phone number, and parents’name, runs a great risk of being leaked. When it falls into the hand of sales persons or frauds, netizens will be inevitably bothered by a serious of sales calls or possibly be blackmailed, leading to so much unnecessary trouble in their lives.
Despite of the fact that these websites (猜词互动) with people’s normal life, they do shorten the distance between people, especially strangers. On the one hand, since people do not need to worry about being embarrassed while communicating through the internet, they feel free to exchange their ideas and leave comments online. They may find it comfortable to share with the one at the other end of the screen the dilemma they are confronted with. On the other hand, the society, in this way, can be more harmonious because these social networking websites, such as Facebook and Instagram, are regarded as both an outlet of negative energy and a form of entertainment. Therefore, the daily conversation in real life will be more relaxing and full of interesting spice obtained from the websites.
In conclusion, being fully aware of the disadvantages of social networking websites, people can still enjoy the merits that they bring to everyone in the society.
思路简述
这是一道科技类的题目,同意不同意社交网站给个人和社会带来了负面影响。我们可以一边倒或者选择先让步再转折的写法。这里我们选择了后者,先分析一下社交网站会有的缺陷,比如会导致个人信息泄露,给生活带来不便。但是对个人和社会也有更多的优点:个人会觉得网络交友这种形式更加自在,可以和陌生人一吐生活中的不快,从而对社会和谐也有促进作用。
重点词汇
proliferation n. a rapid increase in number
Over the past two years we have witnessed the proliferation of TV channels.
outlet n. a way of expressing strong feelings, ideas or energy
Sport became the perfect outlet for his aggression.
leak v. to give secret information to the public
The content of the report was leaked to the press.
spice n. extra interest or excitement
We need an exciting trip to add some spice to our lives.
blackmail v./n. to force sb to give you money or do sth for you by threatening them
She blackmailed him for years by threatening to tell the newspapers about their affair.
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