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20171125雅思写作范例丨海归湾教育雅思真题

发布日期:2017-12-05 14:55
20171125雅思考试写作题目

 

As major cities around the world are growing fast, many problems occur.

 

What are the problems that young people in cities are caused by continued growth?

 

What solutions do you suggest ?

 视 频 讲 解 与 范 文

 

 

An increasing number of cities are developing rapidly in the world, which makes young people living in metropolises suffer a series of issues in their lives. However, there seems to be some solutions to address the problems.

 

The problems young people are facing in big cities are relatively obvious. First, the rapid urban development puts young working adults under intense pressure from fierce job competition. As big cities are where job opportunities and well payments are afforded, too many young people move to metropolises to seek for their ideal jobs, letting job holders on the verge of losing jobs at any time. Meanwhile, high cost of living greatly lowers the living quality of young people. With a limited number of incomes in their hands, youngsters might find it difficult to support themselves, let alone having a reasonable quality of life. 

 

However, there are several 猜词互动  that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, an effective solution would be to create favorable policies to encourage youngsters to set up their own business as a way to practice and make a living. This is expected to alleviate the competition in job market and allow the youths to benefit from bonus of city growth. A second measure would be for governments to provide allowance to university graduates. With rental allowance, young people are able to reduce their workload of part-time jobs. Therefore, they can be more relieved in lives and focus on their careers. 

 

In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise with fast advancement in big cities.

 

教 师 点 评

思路简述

这是一道比较传统的说明文考题,分别在2010,2014年考过。

 

题目的背景是说到全世界大都市的快速发展,question也是说明文的经典提问方式:problems和solutions.

 

这次的考题对于一线城市的烤鸭们来讲还是很接地气的,有没有?很多烤鸭立刻想到了北漂一族。

 

没错,中国的北京,澳洲的悉尼和日本的东京,这些活色生香的大都市带来很多就业机会的同时也给年轻人带来极大的挑战:失业?失眠?各种亚历山大!

 

所以这类的说明文基本上不存在跑题的风险,但我还是要弱弱地提醒大家,说明文的解决方案不是泛泛地描述,而是针对问题和原因提出的,所以请烤鸭们增强2,3两段在内容上的联系。

 

文章结构

Introduction:

introduce the topic+ answer the question.

 

Body 1:

解释年轻人面临的问题:就业+经济压力

 

Body 2:

政府提供解决方案:鼓励创业+提供补助

 

Conclusion:

make a conclusion

 

词汇累积

Put…under pressure: 

put lot of pressure on sb.

e.g. Too much homework and assignment puts students in high school under pressure.  

 

Afford:   

to provide something or allow something to happen 

e.g. The new law will afford protection to employees.

 

On the verge of:  

to be at the point where something is about to happen

e.g. Mountain gorillas are on the verge of extinction.

 

Lower:  

v. to move something down from higher up

e.g. Do you think we should lower the price?

 

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