Full time university students should take a lot of time to study, but it is also essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

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It is true that full time students should devote their time to studying. Personally, I agree with the idea that it is also necessary for students to participate in other activities, because I believe that they are equally important.

 

On the one hand, to focus on studying is essential in order for students to be more competitive on job hunting. For example, undergraduates all need to acquire job-related knowledge and skills for career preparation. Most students consider it a priority to study for seeking jobs. If they spent all of their time on entertainment or other non-academical things, they might find it difficult to compete with others. Lower academically achieving students, for instance, pay less attention to studying so that they cannot work in professions such as doctor, teacher and lawyer, because these jobs require applicants to have professional knowledge. 

 

Nevertheless, other activities are just as important as what students learn from university. Firstly, practical activities are extremely important for undergraduates to understand the knowledge they gained from text. Practical experience, for example, can make students comprehend the relationship between professional knowledge and practical application and master the skills which can be used in the future. Secondly, many undergraduates learn how to communicate effectively from their social parties, the voluntary service they organize, and the group video games they play, rather than the knowledge they acquire. Finally, students can improve their health if they usually take part in physical activities, which are also positive for their mental development.

 

In conclusion, while full-time undergraduates should spend amounts of time on studying, I believe that other activities are also essential for them.

解析

思路简述

这是一道典型的A/D类题目，也是五年前的老题重现。题目中的study和other activities都是我们需要在文章中进行讨论的关键信息，首先学习当然是学生的首要任务，并且它可以提高学生的求职竞争力，但是课余活动对于学生来说也是非常必要的，因为它可以促进学生的实践与交流能力以及身心等多方面发展。

 

文章结构

Introduction

introduce the topic+ personal opinion 

 

Body 1

分析承认学习对于提高学生求职竞争力的益处

 

Body 2

分析其他活动对于学生更多的全面发展

 

Conclusion 

总结上文，重申观点