• 首页
  • 雅思 / A- Level IGCSE
    • 成绩展示
      • 雅思
      • A- Level IGCSE
    • 课程体系
      • 雅思
      • A- Level IGCSE
    • 雅思自我诊断/测试
      • 自我测试
      • 自我诊断
    • 免费资料
      • 雅思基础词汇
      • 雅思学术词汇
      • 雅思写作范文
      • 雅思口语范例
    • 经典文章
    • 经典文章
    • PTE
      • 为什么选PTE
      • 课程体系
  • 托福
    • 成绩展示
    • 课程体系
    • 自我测试
    • 自我诊断
    • 免费资料
      • 托福基础词汇
      • 托福学术词汇
      • 托福口语范例
      • 托福写作范文
    • 经典文章
  • SAT ACT AP
    • 成绩展示
    • 课程体系
    • 你适合SAT还是ACT
    • 免费资料
  • 海归湾国际图书馆
    • 成绩展示
    • 读书会
      • 三一口语
      • 剑桥少儿英语
      • KET/PET/FCE
      • 自我测试
    • 美系课程
      • 美国国家地理
        • Reading Explorer
        • Great Writing
      • 小托福
      • 自我测试
    • 经典文章
  • 师资团队
  • 学校简介
20170826雅思考试写作范例&点评丨海归湾国际教育雅思真题 关闭 返回上一级  

20170826雅思考试写作范例&点评丨海归湾国际教育雅思真题

发布日期:2017-09-17 13:38

20170826雅思考试写作题目

Full time university students should take a lot of time to study, but it is also essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

undefined

Bob老师视频点评

 

https://v.qq.com/x/page/v0543raslfd.html

 

undefined

Bob老师范例

It is true that full time students should devote their time to studying. Personally, I agree with the idea that it is also necessary for students to participate in other activities, because I believe that they are equally important.

 

On the one hand, to focus on studying is essential in order for students to be more competitive on job hunting. For example, undergraduates all need to acquire job-related knowledge and skills for career preparation. Most students consider it a priority to study for seeking jobs. If they spent all of their time on entertainment or other non-academical things, they might find it difficult to compete with others. Lower academically achieving students, for instance, pay less attention to studying so that they cannot work in professions such as doctor, teacher and lawyer, because these jobs require applicants to have professional knowledge. 

 

Nevertheless, other activities are just as important as what students learn from university. Firstly, practical activities are extremely important for undergraduates to understand the knowledge they gained from text. Practical experience, for example, can make students comprehend the relationship between professional knowledge and practical application and master the skills which can be used in the future. Secondly, many undergraduates learn how to communicate effectively from their social parties, the voluntary service they organize, and the group video games they play, rather than the knowledge they acquire. Finally, students can improve their health if they usually take part in physical activities, which are also positive for their mental development.

 

In conclusion, while full-time undergraduates should spend amounts of time on studying, I believe that other activities are also essential for them.

解析

思路简述

这是一道典型的A/D类题目,也是五年前的老题重现。题目中的study和other activities都是我们需要在文章中进行讨论的关键信息,首先学习当然是学生的首要任务,并且它可以提高学生的求职竞争力,但是课余活动对于学生来说也是非常必要的,因为它可以促进学生的实践与交流能力以及身心等多方面发展。

 

文章结构

Introduction

introduce the topic+ personal opinion 

 

Body 1

分析承认学习对于提高学生求职竞争力的益处

 

Body 2

分析其他活动对于学生更多的全面发展

 

Conclusion 

总结上文,重申观点

上一篇20170826雅思考试口语范例&点评丨海归湾国际教育雅思真题
20170819雅思考试口语范例&点评丨海归湾国际教育雅思真题下一篇
下一篇20170819雅思考试口语范例&点评丨海归湾国际教育雅思真题
分享到:
友情链接:剑桥少儿英语考试官网     剑桥通用英语五级考试官网     剑桥大学英语考评部      
津ICP备2021008683号-1